When the heart thinks and my brain beats
When there is no distinction between victory and defeat
The fear of losing things not gained
and friends shout refrain refrain
Now throwing stones into the pond is a new sport
and when words flow from the heart and sink in my throat
When damage is beyond repair
and I can't handle her stare
I fear I might take what i feel for her to my grave
I wish I wish I could be brave
Finally I muster a lot of courage
All after wasting this whole page
With the only question in my mind I walk up to her and say "Hi
Tell me yeh melody itni choclatee kyu hai ; why ??"
-- Firebird
7 comments:
First of all its been a very long time reading ur blog yar.....and this one is really got some strong statement with a comic ending as expected by you.....but overall a really good one....
Good 1 buddy....
Kya comedy hai...
:P
saale itna emotional hoke.
last mein mazak bana diya...
ha ha ha...
good good...
pehle laga ki, le fir se chalu hogaya chini...
last line pe arre, kya mazak hai...
Good..
chini serious hi tha jab ye likh raha tha. We know coz we r vd him whn he ws writing this,but last me thoda frustrate ho gaya coz he didn't had his fav. Natural' ki Icecream.... :D
nice one dude made me senti!! :) hope u write many more good poems!! :)
hey who is this girl !!!!
Come on plz don't reject sreeni's proposal. Be brave and accept it.
He could not be more open than this. If you are waiting for sreeni to express his feelings more openly then probably you will have to wait for lightyears. So hey melody girl accept the proposal and plz let me know who you are plzzzzzzzzzzzz.
hey sreeni... too good yaaaar.. wht a lovely way to express feelings .. i hope the girl for whom u wrote this hav read it !!
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