Tuesday, March 2, 2010

The Wait

In search of those expressions, that smile than looks
Not a person who listens to me , who gives me a ear
but some one who reads me like a book

A search that leads me to directions none worth pursuing
I see a hole in the ship of my optimism , thats begun sinking

For there are suggestion , of change
and to be happy in what I find rather than what i seek
But I also know it wouldn't be me then ,
and no meaning left in what i seek

tempted to change I am I must admit, but "what if ??" my optimism roars
" What if I find the reader
all the expressions, that smile , I have desired forever
"
Would she be cheated by my decision to change,
for in my optimism and desire was she born
Amongst all this storm, all I now desire is for dawn
-- firebird

10 comments:

ash said...

Terrific...i wish the wait is worth and may you not use any tips....

Bharath R S said...

nice one dude especially the first paragraph :)

anjali said...

too good.... keep it up :)

Vineet Waghdhare said...

:)

Amod said...

awesome...very well written sreeni...keep up the good work :)

parag said...

gr8 one cheeni...hope u never change ;)

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sibm said...

nice work sceeni..
I hope ur search ends soon... :)

-Vaibhav

pallavi said...

cool!!!